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Post by roughdraft525 on Aug 8, 2010 18:59:32 GMT -5
Wow. This was my favorite. Clean Bella, thieving Angela, positive Edward. Thank you so much for this. It was excellent. And the round of concurring doctors--FUCKING AMAZING
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Post by irunwithvamps7 on Aug 8, 2010 19:31:45 GMT -5
Oh, thank you. I loved this -- absolutely loved it. <Breathe...>
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Post by luv2readff on Aug 8, 2010 20:27:43 GMT -5
Finally managed to catch up with this story, and I have to say it's been one heck of a rollercoaster. At one minute I wanted to slap Bella, then the next minute I wanted to slap Edward! I totally understand why you chose the route you did, and it totally makes it more realistic, but it's always hard to watch Bella or Edward suffer and in this case, both have. I'm glad to see things are moving forward and I really hope there aren't any steps backwards... a few bumps along the way, fine, but no going back!!! LOL
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Post by callsignc30 on Aug 8, 2010 22:43:55 GMT -5
"It feels healthy. It feels right. I can't even explain it to myself half the time…but there's not a single part of me that doesn't want you. That doesn't love you completely and insanely."
Stick a fork in me....I'm done. Amazing doesn't even begin to do it justice.
LOVE!!!!
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Post by sabrina cabrera on Aug 8, 2010 22:44:34 GMT -5
-"Loving you. It hurts. You make me feel shit I don't want to feel and then you add Grace to it and…I don't want to be a bad person. It just hurts." I close my eyes and feel his fingers wipe away what they produce.- That was the best part for me. By far. You´re amazing, I dont know how you get your head to work so fast but I´m just glad it does
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Post by dani on Aug 8, 2010 22:45:59 GMT -5
- Fucking hilarious. I find her fingers under the table. I lace mine into hers. "I concur." She laughs and so do I. And so do I. - *deep.sigh* Admit that you are good. Admit it. Right fucking know. Write me back and say ‘I concur’ [/quote]
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Post by alli62 on Aug 8, 2010 22:57:00 GMT -5
This story is unfuckingbelievable. I love how real it is. This Bella is so hurt yet so wonderful. I also love that you update so often. It makes me very happy. Thank you for sharing this story.
P.S. I really don't want it to end.
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Post by Kj on Aug 8, 2010 23:06:50 GMT -5
Beautiful words from each vulnerable, redemption-seeking person in this story. Beautiful, staggeringly genius words from you. Their communication is painful, truthful and raw. But they are communicating. "This is the part of the night" he was looking forward to. EVERY part of UtAT that you generously give to US is what I look forward to. I am deeply gracious that you choose to write this story accurately and genuinely and wholly. You are exquisitely talented. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.
With utmost awe and respect, Kj @musingsonother
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Post by Crazy Reader on Aug 8, 2010 23:07:38 GMT -5
Wow Chapter 60 was Ahhhmazing! This story is sooooo beautiful and honest. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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Post by daya27 on Aug 8, 2010 23:07:57 GMT -5
Great Chapter!!! So happy for Bella and Edward!! ""This is the part I was looking forward to, tonight."" omg the best!!!!
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Post by coltgal on Aug 8, 2010 23:20:46 GMT -5
*Gasp* what are you doing to me Dani? This story OWNS me right now . You just keep feeding my addiction!!! The most serious conversation he has ever had with cum in his pants... LOL. That was a great line! I loved how she opened up to him and how he opened up to her. Neither of them are perfect but somehow they are so perfect for eachother. Amazing! I especially LOVE LOVE LOVE her bath time with Grace. So cute and sweet! Also, I feared that they would see Newton at one point or another so I am glad they faced it and came away unscathed... for the most part. I'm glad Edward fired him!
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Post by Angelica on Aug 8, 2010 23:20:52 GMT -5
This was the bessssssst! You basically gave me everything I asked for, and I have to wonder if you did it just to please me. (don't worry , I know that's not true) They are both pretty much redeemed in my eyes, and I'm so freaking happy you updated!
You are amazing, just like this story! You're so amazing in fact, I'm just getting sucked in to your other fic.
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Post by Kristi B on Aug 8, 2010 23:21:52 GMT -5
I am speechless, but wanted to tell you so. I am overwhelmed by your ability to capture these complex emotions so authentically. Bravo, Dani, seriously.
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Post by obsmama on Aug 8, 2010 23:22:05 GMT -5
great chapter I am still all out of words cause yours are to purdy!!!
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Post by jime22 on Aug 8, 2010 23:23:50 GMT -5
Loved it, Danny, thank you for updating again so soon
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