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Post by musetteblanchard on Aug 11, 2010 10:17:44 GMT -5
What's left to say? I concur with all the good things said about this chapter and all the others! Dani, you're an amazing writer, and it warms my heart to see what a long way Bella has come to finally be there... Ohhh...true love can make it all happens! I do believe it! Did I say I love you? I do. Thanks for the wonderful moments you are giving us *moisty eyes, sniffling*
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Post by Lisa D on Aug 11, 2010 14:19:14 GMT -5
It never ceases to amaze me that you can say SO much with so FEW words. Sometimes, it cuts through me like a knife. Other times I am crying and do not even realize that I am doing. The emotions in this story are so powerful that there are times that I am absolutely exhausted after reading a chapter. I only recently found this story and was absolutely blown away and totally addicted after the first chapter. I only read one or two chapters a day because this story is like Godiva chocolates; I always savor them because they are just so damn good.
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Post by 1twifan4evr on Aug 11, 2010 16:11:56 GMT -5
Hello all!! I am new to this story. It comes highly reccommended so I'm ready for the journey. I am not sure what is really going on other than bea is obviously a stripper.....I wonder how things will unfold.
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Post by justsu on Aug 11, 2010 17:46:20 GMT -5
Hi !! *waving hands* I´m a newbie here and I don´t know very well if this is the right place to post my impressions/review for the story Just wanna say *clearing my throat* [glow=red,2,300] UNDER THE APPLE TREE is the most amazing ff I´ve read this year!! [/glow] Terrific writing, wonderful characters_tridimensional, flawless, real and authenticy human_, perfect, painful plot... I´m in love. So thanks to the friend who leads me to it and thanks to the author. Love from Spain. Su. Ps: and yes, my English sucks
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Post by biteme1994 on Aug 12, 2010 11:50:13 GMT -5
Superb! Love the super power you posses.
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Post by biteme1994 on Aug 12, 2010 12:03:15 GMT -5
Had a feeling Newton would be the one he would contact for the addition. It never happened in the year earlier as it was going to be. Obviously. He called her Tanya. That had to hurt more than all of the other jabs. Even with all the other shit. Love that you have us jump time and end with the date and "This is the part I was looking forward to, tonight."
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Post by biteme1994 on Aug 12, 2010 14:31:01 GMT -5
Oh, and cause I just thought of it. Edward was on Bella about leaving Grace unattended, yet strapped in I would imagine, in her high chair. Not knowing it was Newton being there causing B to leave the kitchen, not her lack of mothering instincts. How much worse was that than when he put Grace on the bed not the floor during the show down with Angela. Grace is over a year old. She may not be walking on her own yet, but guessing can roll and crawl? She could just a easily fell of the bed cause not one of them were watching her the whole time cause of the 'fighting'. Just saying. Irrelevant as it may be.
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Post by yogacat on Aug 12, 2010 18:39:51 GMT -5
I am not sure how this works...but I gotta try. Nice work, great story and your writing is beautiful.
I'm almost caught up. Like everyone else, I am on a UtAT marathon.
cat
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Post by featherme on Aug 12, 2010 21:57:03 GMT -5
I have heard about this story for a while now and was featured on RAoR recently as a Sinday rec. I and am so glad I've finally started on it. I have spent every free moment I've had in the past few days reading and getting caught up. I love it. The writing is fantastic. What a roller coaster these two have been on. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job. This is going to be one of my all time favorites. Thanks for writing!!
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Post by gagator on Aug 13, 2010 23:33:50 GMT -5
I am in love with this. It is so sweet and heartbreakingly sad. I wasn't going to start this until it was completed but some many people rec'd it that I was too tempted. It is amazing and I pray they get a happy ending because they really deserve it.
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Post by Kj on Aug 14, 2010 3:40:27 GMT -5
The amount of sensation, feeling, emotion, and thought you put into this story is staggering. This chapter was so unbelievably sexy and sensual, but also awkward, heartwarming, funny and poignant. Edward's sensitivity and instincts towards protecting but opening the lines of communication with Bella is just beautiful. Poetic and resonant. I LOVE these two together. I LOVE the journey they're making ,the risks they're taking...together. Simply enchanting. Thank you so much. I have talked you and your story up so much on Twitter and on my own blog, because I cannot deny the powerful effect it has over me. I'm enraptured.
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Post by obsmama on Aug 14, 2010 3:48:16 GMT -5
loved it!!!! The Emmett shit fucking hilarious and the awkwardness was written wonderfully then Jesus woman schellen is a sex god huh woo maybe I can wake my own up! Handled beauitfully
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Post by bellabells7279 on Aug 14, 2010 4:13:35 GMT -5
Beautiful chapter. Love it.
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Post by meee611 on Aug 14, 2010 4:13:43 GMT -5
Absolutely loved it! Just everything about it..
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Post by moninp on Aug 14, 2010 5:20:13 GMT -5
wow... just beautiful... so glad to see he wants her to get better, them dealing with real issues... and so glad to see her finding her voice.. wonder what Esme spoke with Alice about Bella.. ¿? ... mmm... xoxo ... thank you for another wonderful update.. it's 5:19am.. was about to go to sleep, when I saw you had updated.. guess I'm having nicer rob dream now.. *winks*
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