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Post by Kimberlina903 on Jul 16, 2010 7:26:08 GMT -5
Loved loved loved this chapter. I can see how Bella's pregnancy hormones are taking over and Edward is doing an amazing job helping her.
He's so flippin' sweet I won't need candy for a year!
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Post by Angelasampedro99 on Jul 16, 2010 8:15:29 GMT -5
I loved the chapter as always, I can totally understand Bella just shows how immature I am ... I would of had the same reaction as her... I was just confused about that middle part when she goes to the Black's house... isn't Leah Jacobs mother and married to Sam... I thought it was Sue that was married to Harry?... so when she is talking to her shouldn't it be Sue ... not Leah.
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Post by lovemesomeangst on Jul 16, 2010 8:43:45 GMT -5
I hope I am replying in the right place. Is it possible to love your Edward any more? I don't think so. He is perfection. Bella's reactions to the new nanny seemed dead on with how someone in her situation would react. I'm just so glad that Edward was able to make her understand. Also, I loved how Emmett was able to make her see that he wanted to help Jacob , but that they need to do it the right way. As alwaysm excellent chapter.
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Post by rachelin on Jul 16, 2010 8:50:24 GMT -5
Hopefully this is the right place to review.......anyway, I will follow your story anywhere you put it--it is that good. Chapter 51--Ughhh...so hard for Bella having to watch Angela take over her "duties". I love how Bella gets jealous--if she is getting that jealous over laundry and breakfast, how is she going to feel about Angela taking care of Grace???!!! And can Edward be any more perfect? I swear, he is the perfect man--says and does everything right. Swoonworthy...swoonward? OK-thanks for the update--I am missing the multiple updates a week, you had us spoiled
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Post by crookedsmile101 on Jul 16, 2010 9:18:08 GMT -5
Chapter 51: He's so sweet that he hired someone else to help her so she can do her school work and for the baby etc... but i can totally see where she is coming from i mean he has already slept with one housekeeper (bella) so whats to say he won't do it again, i know he won't and i know bella knows he won't but us women have these insecurities and for bella as well feeling fat cos of the baby u just don''t feel attractive at all sometimes! I love Rose and Emm's idea to teach Jacob how to stick up for himself its great! You know, I don't think that she thinks that he did it once, he can do it again. She is just pissed at Angela to burst their 'only-for-two' bubble.. She is pissed at herself for being fat(!)... She is pissed at life for making Edward to need to hire someone. Pissed at the fact that she is not the only one who is around him at house. She is just jealous. And such emotions like jealousy doesn't contain reasons. I'm with you on Em and Jacob thing.
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Post by enamoredheart on Jul 16, 2010 9:19:48 GMT -5
Chapter 51 review This new format is still too new for me...Anyway, here goes the review: This Edward is so sweet and human, he's almost unreal. And yet such amazing persons exist, but they're just hard to find because they're so discreet about themselves. I love jealous Bella and I could totally get her jealousy. These little things she did for Cullen, as she calls him, are not only chores, but ways to show her love for him. Hence the jealousy is completely understandable. I loved how supportive Leah and Jake were and how well they understood Edward's intentions. I also loved how Edward showed Bella she is beautiful even as a pregnant woman. That was so endearing. Can't wait for the next update...But then you know this already dear dani, since I'm ready to follow your story wherever you decide to post it.
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Post by Nonita on Jul 16, 2010 9:32:27 GMT -5
Chapter - 51 Wonderful chapter. I loved it! Thanks! Maribel
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Jul 16, 2010 9:48:53 GMT -5
I just discovered this story after hearing so many people comment on it on Twitter. I am to chapter 10 so far!! I really am liking your story- I was up till 2am reading,lol.
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Post by min on Jul 16, 2010 10:20:51 GMT -5
Ch51, awesome chapter! Not fixing his tie said I'm not happy louder I think than anything she could have said. Bella always amazes me. Even as jealous and insecure as she was, she took the higher road and allowed for Angela to stay, whilst all the while I was wanting her to kick the cock-blocker right back out 'their' door. I hope she continues to amaze me... yes we know I'm all for maternal Bella, I can't help but think it when she palms her belly and gets protective over Jacob... but I am preparing myself (aka stocking up on Clinkers - and so help me god, they'd better all be pink!) in the event she doesn't find it. I have to wonder how she will be with sharing(?) Grace, with Angela?!
Brilliantly written as always. And congrats on the Shimmer Awards! Thanks for writing!
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Post by phoebe on Jul 16, 2010 10:52:53 GMT -5
Thank you for the updates ! Knowing it must be a hard and troublesome work to upload all the chapters to a new place. Please take your time. We will be very patient and wait. I think I really like these small but magnificent changes of Bella. She is growing, getting better, becoming a better woman than she used to be. And all was fm Edward s help and love. I just love their relationship building slow and steady like a river , but pure and natural and beautiful. I am wondering how many months is she now on her pregnancy tho ? curious... oh and CS! I am waiting for your banners for this story xxoxoxo
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Post by prettykittyartist on Jul 16, 2010 11:02:59 GMT -5
Chapter was great as always, I really like the new site! It looks great. Thank you so much for putting so much time and effort into this for us! Your amazing~ Can't wait for next chappie
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Post by dani on Jul 16, 2010 13:38:55 GMT -5
I loved the chapter as always, I can totally understand Bella just shows how immature I am ... I would of had the same reaction as her... I was just confused about that middle part when she goes to the Black's house... isn't Leah Jacobs mother and married to Sam... I thought it was Sue that was married to Harry?... so when she is talking to her shouldn't it be Sue ... not Leah. Yup! I goofed! Thank you. *fixing*
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Post by biteme1994 on Jul 16, 2010 14:13:15 GMT -5
Wonderful job! Love jealous Bella. Edward couldn't find a Nanny McPhee? Or maybe Angela is...in disguise...without the magic, dancing donkey, and warts. There when you don't want her and goes when she is not needed.
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Post by FL95 on Jul 16, 2010 14:40:53 GMT -5
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Post by justagirl1237 on Jul 16, 2010 14:56:23 GMT -5
I hope I'm doing this right because I really want to leave you a review apparently I am the worst at adjusting to change, so I'm trying to figure out this new site without having a meltdown.....Anyway...I another really good chapter. She's starting to become territorial - stay away from her man - luv it! I also love how sweet he is to her. That's not his baby she's carrying (in the traditional sense anyway) but he makes sure to tell her how beautiful she is and kisses her belly. I think having a new housekeeper is a great addition. She's going to realize that she wants to stay with him now that it's not just their little bubble where she is calling the relationship shots. Can't wait for the next chapter Will we get update notices from this site?
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