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Post by ksw3 on Jul 15, 2010 21:26:52 GMT -5
Such a sweet chapter. I am soo happy to be able to follow your story. i would be very sad if I couldnt find it! Thank you for your determination in getting a good website going. Bella is too funny in this chapter. I can understand how she feels. I am liking the website. I know it has been a lot of work! Looking forward to more! BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!
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Post by cabtwilighter on Jul 15, 2010 21:29:03 GMT -5
I kinda liked that she was a little jealous of Angela... I thought it was cute. And I love how Edward handled it. He's awesome. I can't wait to see how training Jacob goes. Thanks for updating.
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Post by crookedsmile101 on Jul 15, 2010 21:32:44 GMT -5
Feather kisses - sigh Jealous Bella - Hell yeah I would be too, normal female reaction. Adding in the fact he didn't discuss before he did it. Yay for Emmett getting to teach Jacob to fight back. And I would like to take this moment to address a few things. 1. I will follow wherever you go. 2. You are still one of my heroes 3. I feel like such a crappy reviewer after seeing Jo's and Crooked's reviews. Please please please don't... We all have other ways to enjoy a story and some of us are more...wordy. LOL I'm sure Dani cherishes every reviews!
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Post by coloradoperson on Jul 15, 2010 21:44:21 GMT -5
I hate the new nanny/housekeeper. yes, I'm as unfair and bitchy as Bella is!! no reason, I just don't like or trust her. Suspicious mind that I have, I wonder if someone planted her in there to cause problems.
For the first time, I'm kind of pissed at Edward. Just a little because I couldn't get too mad at that lovely man. I guess he is not completely perfect, is he? hee, hee, hee. I know his intentions were perfect, but he should have talked to Bella beforehand instead of springing this person on her so they could iron out any problems and decide what Bella wanted to hang on to - like making breakfast. I know he doesn't want to upset her in any way, but come on, she's an adult and Edward certainly had a valid reason for bringing help in. And Bella needs to grow up and give Edward a break. I know that Edward understands and even adores her little temper tantrums, but the day needs to come when he can quit walking on eggshells with her. She needs to be clear on what she wants this person to do and not to do so she won't feel she is being replaced.
I really love this Bella, but her attitude about the baby is starting to grate on my nerves. I know she is hurt and vulnerable and all that stuff and I'm not blaming or judging her at all. It's just bothering me a bit and I guess I'm not as patient as Edward is. I hope that she changes her attitude and allows herself to develop the kind of love that this baby deserves - and that she deserves herself. I know that she has so much love in her and would make a wonderful mother if she would only believe in what Edward sees in her. Can't she see how Jacob believes in her -a boy who doesn't really trust anyone? oh well, we'll see how this plays out, right? At least she started school which is a big step for her.
I do like how Emmett decided to handle the Jacob situation. I can't say that I blame Rose for being pissed, but she does need to lose the attitude with Bella. Her husband is such a loving man, a big lug who is kind to everyone even when they aren't kind to themselves. His decisions aren't the best sometimes, but they are always made for the right reasons. She needs to fix that chip on her shoulder and hold on to that man and appreciate him with everything she has in her.
I think I'm in a pissy mood tonight. Everything is annoying me. ha, ha.
great chapter. It sure got me thinking! I truly love this story!
I like this blog much better than the other one. It looks beautiful!
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Post by edmazing on Jul 15, 2010 21:47:12 GMT -5
So much to love...even when I'm not liking what's going on!
-Rose and Bella's exchange was strained and almost animalistic. Very true for both their personalities. -The jealousy and the tantrum in the kitchen!!! Thinking about it now still makes me cringe and flash back to stupid shit I've done!
And, when I'm liking what's going on...well, it's HEAVEN!
-Tuned in Cullen: he is perfect. -Turned on Cullen: he is perfect sin.
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Post by SydneyAlice on Jul 15, 2010 22:09:44 GMT -5
Lovely chapter, and I love the look of the new blog!
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Post by nicoleford on Jul 15, 2010 22:16:55 GMT -5
Each chapter is better than the one before it! Thank you for all the effort you keep putting forth to update chapters and starting new blogs/websites. I so appreciate it! <3
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eneas
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Post by eneas on Jul 15, 2010 22:19:52 GMT -5
CHAPTER 51 WAS GREAT. LOVE IT.
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Post by Fabkish on Jul 15, 2010 23:27:36 GMT -5
Another great chapter! I'm glad Emmett and Rose are working on their marriage and also helping Jacob as well. I think Edward did a wonderful thing by hiring Angela...trying to lessen Bella's burden. Bella's jealousy was expected and I'm glad she was able to move past it but I do hope she apologizes to Angela for her outburst at some point! Thank you for updating!
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Post by ruth on Jul 15, 2010 23:47:48 GMT -5
i am so in love with your story. i read through chap 50 for like a day and half cause i just can't stop. and chap 51 is great..can't wait for the next one
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Post by bellabells7279 on Jul 16, 2010 0:01:23 GMT -5
Love this chapter so much. It's so cute how Bella is jealous.
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Post by alejita18 on Jul 16, 2010 0:08:32 GMT -5
All Im gonna say is she thought, the baby.. Good Night All!
Can't wait till next update!
Love Jealous B!!! =)
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Post by OhCarol on Jul 16, 2010 4:38:14 GMT -5
Dani, I can't get enough of this story... Seriously! I'm constantly sighing when I read it. So here's my review to chapter 51: Oh dear God, pregnant Bella is annoying! OK, I know. It's the hormones, I know, but that was one of the few times where she actually lost some points in her scale of awesomeness with me. hahah I still love her, in spite of this. I think Edward should have talked to her first about Angela... I'm sure she wouldn't have been so upset by that. I'm not sure how I feel about Emmett teaching Jacob how to fight...? I'm against teaching violence to kids, so yeah, I think it would be safer if they figured out another way to protect him. Anyway, I love this chapter (as always). It had some of the most beautiful/meaningful moments of the story so far!
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Post by flojo03 on Jul 16, 2010 4:59:05 GMT -5
really enjoy this chapter interesting how they think differently about the terms of endearment ie baby, sweetheart, I liked how edward knew that bella would be upset because angela was pretty & good looking & that if he could he would have employed and ugly fugly. So happy that bella finally after plenty of persuasion allowed edward to see her stomach
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Post by ukalice on Jul 16, 2010 5:16:41 GMT -5
Chapter 51: He's so sweet that he hired someone else to help her so she can do her school work and for the baby etc... but i can totally see where she is coming from i mean he has already slept with one housekeeper (bella) so whats to say he won't do it again, i know he won't and i know bella knows he won't but us women have these insecurities and for bella as well feeling fat cos of the baby u just don''t feel attractive at all sometimes! I love Rose and Emm's idea to teach Jacob how to stick up for himself its great!
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