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Post by karolkid on Aug 6, 2010 21:24:41 GMT -5
Loved the last updates even if they were hard to read; these things needed to happen so that bella and edward can be the best couple and parents for grace.
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Post by shon on Aug 6, 2010 21:38:22 GMT -5
Edward's such a good guy. I feel for all of them. Bella feels bad about what's going on with Grace but she really needs to get it together before she really loses both of them. Great chapter.
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Post by flojo03 on Aug 6, 2010 21:42:32 GMT -5
another tear filled chapter for me. Read bellas visits with the shrink over a long period of time makes it realistic, edward was right she is smart she will work it out and so she went to see someone, even though she said she had to because edward had told her, so she went and by the looks of it is paying for the visits herself, it shows that she does want to help herself to be better for cullen and grace. I think the fear with calling/contacting him was that she was worried that he wouldnt want her anymore and she would loose him like she had lost her dad
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Post by coltgal on Aug 6, 2010 21:55:39 GMT -5
Wow, those were two very powerful chapters. I am glad she actually did something for herself! I would hate for it to be too late to be with Edward but I am so proud that she did this for herself. I hope since the end said Meeting number one that it means they will meet while she proves to be worthy of him and little Grace.
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Post by callsignc30 on Aug 6, 2010 22:08:49 GMT -5
I loved this chapter. I particularly loved the dialog between Bella and Charlie, and the image of Bella holding a photo that shows the signs of being looked at a million times.
When I see "Bella is finally worthy" comments, I have to respectfully agree.
Bella has ALWAYS been worthy of Shullen and Grace. Always.
But maybe I am reading the comments wrong - because they could also mean that Bella finally realizes this herself and that is happiness right there.
I still feel like they have a long way to go, but now I truly believe they will get there.
Have I mentioned that I loved this chapter?
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Post by ldybug1701 on Aug 6, 2010 22:27:15 GMT -5
I only have one word "Grandpa". *Burst into tears* This story is just a roller coaster ride. I have never wanted to hate and love someone at the same time like Bella. A whole year...*shakes head*javascript:add("%20:'(")
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Post by irunwithvamps7 on Aug 6, 2010 22:37:35 GMT -5
I didn't seek treatment for the B.S. that my mother did to me until I was 30 years old. I am learning, but am still hoping that I don't miss out on too much more of my life. I have to accept ownership of it. I know that is what Bella is doing in this chapter.
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Post by fanny on Aug 6, 2010 22:59:30 GMT -5
I LOVED IT. even thought it was incredibly heartbreaking.
I LOVE YOU. even though you gave me the chin wobble tears.
I LOVE SHULLEN mr amazingpants. he was in it for like a mention and fuckin hell, even in that mention he was his perfect self.
AND I LOVE BELLA. brave brave girl.
and the rest you know on fb.
thank you, thank you, thank you bb.
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Post by kiddielikeplay on Aug 6, 2010 23:24:11 GMT -5
I started reading this in June before I went on vacation and had to stop; It was way too much heartfail for me at the time and I wanted to punch Bella and even Edward for putting up with her. I went on vacay and came back and this week started reading the story again from the start. *Le Sigh* I love it. I do; I still cringe and get emotional but that's the tell signs of good writing, when it invokes strong emotions. Great Job and hopefully Bella will have a breakthrough sooner rather than later and I really wonder what the story would be like if you should have Edward move on a bit and let Bella feel herself lose him and the baby. Anyway.....I'm captivated. Bravo
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Post by kelmikmag on Aug 6, 2010 23:39:37 GMT -5
:)Love, love, love this story - your writing is incredible! I followed you over from FF. Really hoping Bella hits bottom soon and starts getting her act together.
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Post by callsignc30 on Aug 6, 2010 23:59:20 GMT -5
While reading Chapter 58, I immediately thought of this song:
Coldplay - 'Warning Sign'
A warning sign, I missed the good part then I realized, I started looking and the bubble burst. I started looking for excuses.
Come on in, I've gotta tell you what a state I'm in, I've gotta tell you in my loudest tones, That I started looking for a warning sign.
When the truth is, I miss you. Yeah the truth is, That I miss you so.
A warning sign, You came back to haunt me and I realized you were an island and I passed you by, You were an island to discover.
Come on in, I've gotta tell you what state I'm in, I've gotta tell you in my loudest tones, That I started looking for a warning sign.
When the truth is, I miss you. Yeah the truth is, That I miss you so.
And I'm tired, I should not have let you go.
So I crawl back into your open arms. Yes, I crawl back into your open arms. And I crawl back into your open arms. Yes, I crawl back into your open arms...
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Post by rclaurel on Aug 7, 2010 1:11:28 GMT -5
Looks like Bella is starting to move forward, I hope she can change before its to late, How long will Edward hold out before he needs someone to Love him the way he should be loved..
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Post by bellabells7279 on Aug 7, 2010 1:32:49 GMT -5
Love this Chapter. I love this Bella the most. Your story is so real and honest. I don't know why some people would criticize Bella for acting this way towards Edward and Grace. It's only natural for her to be this way after all she went through. Now she is trying. She's so brave. UTAT is my world.
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Post by moninp on Aug 7, 2010 2:09:40 GMT -5
*sniff* ... loved it, heartbreaking as hell, but so real ...
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Post by enamoredheart on Aug 7, 2010 9:57:36 GMT -5
Chapter 58 Oh this chapter was like agony until it turned sweet in the end, when she finally made it to that meeting that she was supposed to attend.
So much pain she carries within her and she just has to let go of it...I hope the time gone by has helped her do that. I really hope so.
And I also hope he's been constant. Well, he is Cullen, after all, and he's always known where he stands.
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