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Post by ukalice on Aug 14, 2010 5:22:02 GMT -5
Damn that was good! i loved how it wasn't all oh yeah lets get it on... they were right to be nervous they are starting all over again, dating and everything....it was so sweet and how he reassured her with his kisses, loved it!
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Post by skye282 on Aug 14, 2010 6:06:55 GMT -5
I just got into this story the last few chapters but I've really enjoyed reading it, once I started I had to keep reading until I caught up,lol. This last chapter I really loved the shyness of them both, almost awkward in being with each other. They are learning to right way now to be together. I also love that she is really bonding with Grace now.
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Post by Julesmpg on Aug 14, 2010 6:50:37 GMT -5
So wonderful, worth the wait! I just love these two together, they are good.
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Post by Kimberlina903 on Aug 14, 2010 7:04:14 GMT -5
That was EPIC! This chapter was so amazing and you do the scenes so tastefully, I love that!! I'm so glad these two are working through their issues and sexual tension...can't wait for BPOV!
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Post by Violet on Aug 14, 2010 7:09:48 GMT -5
So happy that they are learning to communicate, even though they both have fears and insecurities.
I just love Esme! She doesn't have her own "agenda" when it comes to Bella and Edward, but just wants them all to be happy and emotionally healthy - and is supportive of her son and granddaughter.
I hope we get to see the conversations between Bella and Esme that occurred while Edward was with Emmett...
I love shy and nervous Edward and Bella...adorable...
Thank you so very much, Dani!! You are so talented!! Thank you for sharing your gift with us, and thank you for being so quick about updating!!
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Post by kellyprovence on Aug 14, 2010 8:03:49 GMT -5
Before I even got my coffee i came to read this. now i am bawling. so sweet. as soon as Emse says "she likes the music".....the tears started flowing. its not even 8am yet and I have to leave town for my nephews basketball tourney. I have yet to get my 2 kids up and i havent taken a shower. an hour and half i have to leave....... BUT THE WORLD STOPS FOR THIS STORY.
if i had left and not read this, i wouldnt have been able to concentrate on the games. I am better now and although i want more i am content to wait until next time because there is love! Love that we waited for, Oh, and trusting and she is opening up to him. BUT the way you do it is so, so Bella like. Believable and not sappy and shit like alot of fics.
You are the best story teller. I think i have turned a few people on to this fic just yesterday (besides my pimping every other day) on Twitter. Some wanted an Epic fic and I gave them this link. THe other wanted Daddyward and I said this is eventual daddyward. one of them was tweeting me all night saying how she couldnt stop reading. all i could say was, i know.
thanks! looking forward to more!
kellyprovence
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Post by whiplashes on Aug 14, 2010 8:28:32 GMT -5
More than a three letter word... so that would be a four letter word then?
What a nice beginning to my Saturday morning.
Thank you! Lovely!
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Post by twimoma on Aug 14, 2010 8:34:40 GMT -5
That was beautiful!! They are reconnecting on a wonderful level. You are a beautiful writer and I love that you put yourself out there for us to read.
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Post by enamoredheart on Aug 14, 2010 9:02:39 GMT -5
Chapter 61 What can you say when faced with perfection? This chapter was absolutely beautiful!
I loved Emmett's intuition, how he managed to get it out of Edward, the real problem he was facing with Bella.
I loved the discovery that was shared with us, which is that Grace loves music, even if she can't hear it.
And oh, the love scene between Edward and Bella was oh so sweet! He had every right to be nervous, after such a long time, not knowing what would really be expected of him.
And she was so fragile when she confessed her fear...I loved the way in which he succeeded to make her feel safe and at ease, to understand that with him she is loved and she is safe. Beautiful!
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Post by jadedworld1 on Aug 14, 2010 9:16:29 GMT -5
i dont have words to describe what this fic makes me feel...and understand. as a rule, i dont read anything with kids, pregnancies or worst, one, where edward or bella was previously inlove.
i donĀ“t know why, but to me, is like... bella or edward - for who ever the case may be - is getting emotional sloppy seconds, which are the worst kind, much more so than the physical ones.
edward said once, this is not a competiotion. i guess for me, always is.
and yet i get this fic.
and i love it.
and i wouldnt change a thing.
thanks for writing and sharing it with us.
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Post by nicflex on Aug 14, 2010 9:17:22 GMT -5
That was really sweet. I love B and E. I love how vulnerable each of them are. Great Chapter!
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Post by itlnbrt on Aug 14, 2010 9:24:15 GMT -5
I saw this story rec'd everywhere and finally read it in like less than 24 hours. It is incredible. I love your writing style. I understand it, it clicks with me and I feel it so much more. I don't know but you are truly an inspiration. Thank you for sharing this story with all of us. It is beautiful!
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Dirty shoes
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Post by lr51 on Aug 14, 2010 9:26:21 GMT -5
Loved the chapter. Edward is just the best!
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Post by RCLAUREL on Aug 14, 2010 9:48:04 GMT -5
Wow that is one of the best chapters I have read, Bella and Edward are on the right track....communicating and feeling the love these to share.....can not wait to read the next chapter
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Post by ldybug1701 on Aug 14, 2010 9:48:35 GMT -5
It is just so sweet that things are coming back together. I love that they spent the whole night kissing. It is so wonderful how he is able to make her feel safe. I tell you just about every chapter makes me cry. It is all so moving.
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