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Post by leechlover81 on Aug 19, 2010 9:53:34 GMT -5
this chapter was amazing, breathtaking, and beautiful. i love that she moved back in with him and i loved the sex talk with jake, it was hilarious! Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by mia on Aug 19, 2010 9:55:05 GMT -5
Crying so much right now, i barely can see the letters on my keyboard. Great chapter... Love your story a little more every day. thanks Mia
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Post by callsignc30 on Aug 19, 2010 10:11:05 GMT -5
Dani, what makes your writing so amazing is that you are a master of the UNSPOKEN word. Every touch and every look and every sigh all mean a thousand different things, all of them lovely in their own way. Favorite moments in this chapter:1. The sex talk - has to be one of the funniest things I've ever read!2. Bella helping Jacob with Bree - how sweet was that? It reminded me of the scene in 'Back to the Future' where McFly tells Lorraine, "You are my density. I mean...my destiny."3. Bella painting with the kids and Grace smacking paint on Shullen's face. 4. The tickets - the symbolism of acceptance in that gift was huge. I LOVE Carlisle and Esme.5. Bella waiting for Alice to show up at the mall - so heartbreaking, but what a huge step for Bella. I was immensely proud of her.6. Bella saying, "daddy's home." *melting*7. Shullen showing up in the restaurant. I'm crying just thinking about it! I'll save my most favorite for the end of my review.I have to say something about Alice first. I'm sure she is getting a lot of hate mail right now....but not from me. I understand where she is coming from completely. She is doing exactly what she should be doing right now, and that is being fiercely protective of her brother. I truly believe she will come around. But we all gave Bella a chance to learn and change, and now it's time to do the same for Alice. And I think that just like Shullen and Bella, Alice and Bella's relationship in the end will be stronger as a result of going through all of this together. OK, favorite moment in the chapter: Bella's gift for Grace. Don't know when I've cried harder reading a story. Other than the fact that again, that gift said a thousand unspoken things, I also cried because of this:http://twitpic.com/2g6e6p/fullThis has been hanging in my mom's kitchen window for years. She has them all over the house, because she has always told her children, "You know you're my heart."Looks like I need to grab the tissue box again!
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Post by shan4al on Aug 19, 2010 10:12:55 GMT -5
OMG Dani this chapter is beautiful though I have come to expect nothing less from you! The conversation at the diner and Bella realizing it was time for her to go home and step over that line brought tears to my eyes...and I am reading at work! Standing O for another lovely chapter and I can't wait to read the next one!
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Post by twimoma on Aug 19, 2010 10:15:20 GMT -5
Ahhhh. I love this chapter. So happy she decided to come home.
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Post by callsignc30 on Aug 19, 2010 10:17:14 GMT -5
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Post by carolamex on Aug 19, 2010 10:19:43 GMT -5
This chapter was all kinds of amazing.....but I have a feeling we are reaching the end of the story? ? I dont think I cant live without Voctor Shullen and Bella and the rest of the crew. You have created such a magnificent story. You are a gift to all of us readers! I hope that it comes back to you tenfold. Love you!
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Post by gennell on Aug 19, 2010 10:21:50 GMT -5
That one thought, that if someone looked through a window at your life what would they see, is very profound. That theme that ran through this chapter showed just how far Bella has come. She is really able to place herself outside the window and look in, and by doing so I think that she finally can see when things are good. She and Edward and Grace are so happy right now. Alice is still a hold-out, but thankfully their happiness does not have to wait for Alice's approval.
Oh and by the way, the facts of life talk that Edward and Emmett gave to Jacob was too cute. I loved it! I really, really enjoyed this whole chapter! I so look forward to your updates on this story. You are great!
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moflo
Ready for an exam by Dr. Shullen
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Post by moflo on Aug 19, 2010 10:23:10 GMT -5
Dani, I lurve, lurve, lurve you! ♥ Another wonderful chapter filled with funny, sweetness, heartbreak and love. Bella saying "alright"....probably the BEST word Edward had ever heard in his life. Bella taking care of her kids and doing the MOM thing is all kinds of win. She is amazing! And her learning to talk with her hands melted my heart into goo. EPIC FAIL on the turkey sex talk! LMAO! In regards to Alice...I'm sorry to say this, but she is being a hateful bitch. How she hurts her brother when he is so happy is beyond me, it's just so wrong to cause more problems when a family is trying so hard to heal, be happy and move on with their lives. She needs to get her head out of her ass and realize that BELLA is NOT Tanya, that BELLA went and FIXED what was wrong inside of her, and KEEPS TRYING to keep it fixed.
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Post by kellyprovence on Aug 19, 2010 10:23:54 GMT -5
Thanks Kelly. I am pretty sure I only have one chapter and an epi left. But dont hold me to anything. No, that makes me cry. I never want it to end. Cant we see them graying ont he porch in white rocking chairs babysitting their grandchildren? What will I do with myself if I cant come her and check the comments 50 million times a day? I lapped up the workshop when you wrote it and now this....do you have others planned and if so, will you post on FF or make another blog? kelly
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moflo
Ready for an exam by Dr. Shullen
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Post by moflo on Aug 19, 2010 10:32:38 GMT -5
post script on Alice....There is one thing to be PROTECTIVE and quite another to be SPITEFUL. Being a stubborn ass to Bella doesn't just affect Bella. It affects Edward-that 2 women he loves don't speak and he is stuck in the middle. It affects GRACE-how confusing would it be for a child to see 2 women she loves not getting along? It affects Esme and Carlisle-to see their children and grandchild not all happy together as a COMPLETE AND LOVING family has to be so hard on them.
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Post by Nonita on Aug 19, 2010 11:00:10 GMT -5
Chapter - 62 Absolutely wonderful chapter!!! Thanks! Maribel
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Post by obsmama on Aug 19, 2010 11:04:39 GMT -5
I kiss him back. "I loved you first.
and its true she gets it finally great chapter as well as you write the hurt oh you write the love so much better. It was funny and sweet and pain and wonderful thanks!
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Post by rundelta22 on Aug 19, 2010 11:14:32 GMT -5
I just love your writing style.
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Post by cullencrazy on Aug 19, 2010 11:16:17 GMT -5
This story just.....seriously no words can describe how emotionally involved I am in these characters. This is one that even though I want them to have a HEA I hope at the same time that it takes forever to get there so that I can stay involved in their lives and see these little windows into life with them.
Thank you so much for writing this and for sharing it with us!
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