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Post by Filia1990 on Jul 17, 2010 19:07:01 GMT -5
Uh...I'm not sure how this works but I guess the reply button was the one I had to press to talk. I hope. Anyway, hi again nomad XD The blog is pretty, I have to tell you that! Oh and I like the light white-ish/champagne background behind the text. It's soothing. Yes, I'm talking about it like it's walls in a room, but hey it's 3.07 am and I'm on vacation and I'm under 21 anyway...I'm allowed to say random stuff. Soooo, about chapter 51: Bella's reaction to Angela was natural and even...amusing lol I'd laughed while reading about Edward's jealousy towards Jacob too. They're both acting a little immature but that's what makes their relationship so real. I really enjoyed this chapter. It's a great idea for Em to show Jake how to defend himself. ABout something else: I just wanted to say that Stephenie Meyer's Edward adn Bella never owned me. Ever. In fact, I don't even own them in print or have an actual Twilight saga movie ticket kept in my 'happy things' box. In this story though, I feel for your Edward and Bella and I would feel for them even if their names were Randal and Mel. I read this for the story, I'd read this even if it wasn't Fan fiction. Oh and I'd read it even if you moved it to the North Pole, which is obviously your next stop...just joking but still...I like the walls here, hope you don't leave this place. XD Yawns and sleepy smiles, Filia
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Post by tessaholt on Jul 17, 2010 22:51:42 GMT -5
love the new chapter! cant wait to see what happens next.
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Post by dani on Jul 17, 2010 23:29:41 GMT -5
Hi...First I need to say I' m new at this reviewing on Blog thingy. Keeping fingers crossed it works. Let me know if you get this o.k? thanks. Now, Awesome job on creating this UTAT Blog. It's Crispy and Fresh. And CONGRATULATIONS on winning the Shimmer Award. ;D I can't image it not winning. I have your blog bookmarked and will be checking for updates. But if there is way for you to let us know tell me. I can give you my email address if that's the only way. Well I'm off now, but you have a great weekend and can't wait for the next chappy and that outtake. HUGS! On the CHAPTERS page, there is a box for alerts.
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Post by ana73 on Jul 18, 2010 13:17:22 GMT -5
Well someone had rec'd you on FF, then went to ning, now here at your blog...so i have finally caught up to all of your chapters. I just love your story. You are writing a beautiful story of a troubled young woman and who finds someone to fianlly help her out. You had me reading and reading. I dont really understand the review & discuss box but i just wanted to let you know that i love your story and hope to continue to read more because i feel there is so much of this story left to be told. i do have a feeling that there is going to be more angst in their near future. my only question is...since she was a prostitute and at one point had unprotected sex, how edward could have been with her without one, him being a doctor wouldn't he have been worried of an STD. and is the baby at some sort of risk seeing that she was a prostitute and had a one point unprotected sex and her drinking. Those were my only thoughts...but i LOVE the story. Oh and i think in the future Bella should give esme the nurse's outfit, that would be hilarious. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter
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Post by KZingedbyJax on Jul 18, 2010 17:36:28 GMT -5
Chapter 51 - i hope angelea doesn't do try to get all up in edwards business. i'm really glad that emmett is taking the time to help jacob.
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Post by MujerN on Jul 18, 2010 18:42:26 GMT -5
I'm not a usual reviewer but had to say.... I found your story through fic fans on FB. It is made of awesomesauce that is, like, juicy and made of all things yummy. I have secret parties reading it on my phone and just soakin' it up. LOVE the writing style and the characters. I rec'd it to my friends and we just discuss it every AM online while at work. And yes. thank to you, darlin'! can't wait for the bundle of joy to arrive! :-) Most of all, can't wait to see her and Edward becoming her daddy and watch them both grow! sigh. Keep it up! Here's a pic cuz it's creepy and hilar.
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Post by shopgirl525 on Jul 18, 2010 20:03:32 GMT -5
OMG...I received your FF as a recommendation (from High Anxiety author)...on Wednesday and I just finished finishing all 51 chapters...I'm hooked...line and sinker! I love the way this is written...I feel like I'm talking with them...or like they are sitting there talking with me!! Just love this E/B...and as someone said on this board...they could be Sally or Jim...and I would still feel so connected to these characters. I just LOVE this story...and can not wait to see how it unfolds. Thank you for writing this story...and can not wait for your next update. Oh...oh, how often do you update?
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Post by rpattzgirl on Jul 18, 2010 23:16:00 GMT -5
I don't normally review a FF until it's completely done...but have to with this one...
I adore this story and have been rec'ing it to anyone and everyone on twitter...
It's beautifully written...and deep, thoughtful, and wrought with pain and happiness...
Bella & Edward don't fall in love in like 10 min.
I am ANXIOUSLY awaiting the next chapter.....I am hooked!
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Jul 19, 2010 11:01:03 GMT -5
I have only gotten to ch 35, but this has been the best Twilight fan fic I have read!!! I have read a lot of them but this is so different and I have been reading every chance I get. I am hooked!! I like that E and B get to know each other, I enjoy the sarcasim. I really like that you include both E and B's POV. Thanks. sorry I have not reviewed each chapter, I get so caught up in reading I forget.
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Post by mybluesky on Jul 19, 2010 11:33:49 GMT -5
Still figuring out how to review here, but gotta say I love chapter 51. I squee when this updates. Is Bella still planning on leaving when the baby is born? I'm a little confused about it, the way she promised Tanya she was gonna take care of Edward makes it sound like she's staying, but I don't remember her actually saying this.
Thanks for updating.
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Post by Moflo on Jul 19, 2010 17:17:41 GMT -5
I just found this story this weekend and I haven't been able to stop reading. I can't even come up with the correct word for how wonderful and amazing I think it is. I've cried, I've laughed, I've "AWWW'ed". A really beautiful story. DYING to see how this ends.
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Post by gretaswan on Jul 19, 2010 17:35:42 GMT -5
i <3 this story! Ur such a talented writer. I was wondering if u have any other stories written?
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Jul 19, 2010 19:57:44 GMT -5
Now that I am all caught up!! I liked the last chapter, I hope you cont to update!
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Post by soclutch on Jul 20, 2010 0:04:19 GMT -5
hello all!!
I was just wondering how old Bella is? I know Edward is 29 (now 30) but I am wondering if I missed there being a reference to her age.
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Post by FL95 on Jul 20, 2010 8:27:39 GMT -5
Lurve to the bb head.
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