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Post by Twilight1972 on Aug 26, 2010 12:50:35 GMT -5
What a beautiful ending to a wonderfully written story. I would love to know how many children they have - wonder if they have a boy that Edward and Bella can raise to be a beautiful man. Unconditional love, trust and faith made these two people a family - thank you for sharing.
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Post by luvntwilight on Aug 26, 2010 13:03:34 GMT -5
Best story ever! You are one of my top 3 favorite authors. Your writing is so poetic, I just love the way it flows and the slide show and music at the end......Perfect. God i hope you keep writing, I am so addicted to it. Thanks for an excellent time.
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Post by chtx on Aug 26, 2010 13:04:34 GMT -5
Dani -
What a truly beautiful story and I just loved your ending. Really, bravo! Your story and characters are something that will definitely stay with me for a very long time. This will also be the story that I will measure others by.
I know that a lot of people were unhappy with Bella and some of her choices (leaving Edward and Grace for a year) but it had to happen. It all had to happen in order to get her to see that she is deserving of love and happiness. She is now over flowing with it and is able to give it back to so many others. Love it!
I was really touched with how she accepts her past, tried to reconcile with her mother but will not dwell on it not happening, acceptance and support for her daughter because she is truly a wonderful mother despite not having a role model. She only sees the beauty in all of those in her life! Love it!
I absolutely loved the video. You have mad skills, girl! Again, it was perfect! I am so sad that it is almost over but was thrilled that Edward and Bella were able to expand their family. However, I want to know how many kiddos they had together! You are one of the best and I will definitely read anything that you write and share with us!!!!
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Post by roxiegirl on Aug 26, 2010 13:13:30 GMT -5
Omg. Perfect Dani, just perfect. Such a beautiful, lovely story. I hope to re-read it again in the future. I hope you leave your website up and available for future readers. You are an amazing writer!
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Post by kpeery1 on Aug 26, 2010 13:41:48 GMT -5
Just watch video at the end of the epilogue.
LOVED IT!
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Post by stephstew on Aug 26, 2010 14:30:55 GMT -5
what was the music you used for the video at the end of your epilogue? it was so pretty!
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Post by Nicflex1 on Aug 26, 2010 15:03:57 GMT -5
I loved this story. I am so sorry that is over, but the epi was just beautiful. The development of B and E was just amazing, every step was so great. I remember being so frustrated that B was leaving, but that is life - and I think that time apart for her to grow up (and E bonding with Grace) was spot on. Loved every chapter. You're a great writer, poetic, just lovely.
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Aug 26, 2010 15:58:52 GMT -5
Best ending!! This was the best story I have read. Seeing the characters change and grow with each update was amazing. It was a good mix of angst and love. Whom ever did the video at the end did a awesome job!! Thanks for sharing this story. I look forward to reading your other stories.
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Post by twicrazreader on Aug 26, 2010 16:18:42 GMT -5
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Post by princessmishawaka on Aug 26, 2010 17:06:06 GMT -5
I haven't been able to reply for over a month but finally made another blog name and here I am.
What a super great story. You are such an excellent writer and story teller. Please write more.
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Post by sherrib on Aug 26, 2010 17:54:55 GMT -5
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Post by bonz245 on Aug 26, 2010 19:29:53 GMT -5
I just completed UtAT and I have to say it was beautifully written. What a great story..emotional, so believeable and real. I loved every word. Some stories don't flow and they get boring, but not this one. I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. Thanks for all your words. Just so moving. Looking forward to your next story.
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Post by bb120 on Aug 26, 2010 21:10:10 GMT -5
OMG!! I totally love this story.... one of the best stories I have read so far!! This was just AWSOME!!! and looove the video it was beautifull!!! ♥ LOVED IT! EVERY SINGLE CHAP!!! btw: is this video on youtube?! if not could you PLEASE put it so I can show it to some of my friends?
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Post by cat5050 on Aug 26, 2010 21:25:36 GMT -5
Thank you! That they will have a baby together fits so perfectly. I actually went to a school like you describe here with kindergarten through high school in one building, I am betting a lot of readers can't quite grasp that concept. Esme and Carlisle visiting, Grace dancing with Bree, Jacob there, great. Glad that they moved away and made their life their own. An awesome generous tale, tears and laughter and family. Thank you, thank you. Sweet sweet video, love the words that overlap.
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Post by Crystalb4 on Aug 26, 2010 22:49:22 GMT -5
I've followed this story from the very beginning and I just wanted to tell you that I really like it. You've done a wonderful job with pulling your readers in and keeping them. There were many many chapters where I sat on the edge of my seat beging for more, faster. Great work, thank you for sharing.
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