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Post by timelights on Jan 6, 2011 15:58:20 GMT -5
hi! I rec'd Under The Apple Tree a while back on my community Livejournal and I made a banner for it. I thought I could post it here...
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Post by alohasd on Jan 10, 2011 21:20:44 GMT -5
Hi Dani: It's nice to meet you. I'm a friend of Jo's, whom I adore. I finally started reading UTAT but didn't review till now because I wasn't registered on proboards, HOWEVER, I did review on twitter. So I thought I would just repeat my tweets here! I hope you find this acceptable. AlohaSD @ chap 33 #UTAT I'm blown away by this writing. Her words are so economical and yet so expressive/full. Thanks, twisters for recc'ing #UTAT AlohaSD @ chap 36 #UTAT I've never read a more perfect, concise chap. A lot had to happen and it was so well done. Beautiful. AlohaSD I'm in love with Danieller123. Don't tell hubs. AlohaSD Work is calling me but #UTAT's voice is stronger and more delicious. I should at least get out of bed AlohaSD @ chap 39 #UTAT. No words. All the beautiful words are written by the author. Does anyone know if danieller123 has a twitter acct? AlohaSD @ chap 40 #UTAT who is this author & where has she been all my life? I love her imagery, her cadence, her classy lemons. Not one "dick." Thank you for sharing your amazing talent! I look forward to continuing with your story and will post my twitter reviews here! (p.s. I'm new at this proboards thing so help me if I screw up!)
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Post by belladuluk on Jan 16, 2011 14:43:33 GMT -5
:)I'm not really sure if this message will get to where it's supposed to go but here goes... I can't just leave this journey I've been fortune to take part in with out a humble thank you. Under the Apple Tree is a work of art and as such I won't try to dissect it or even give my lessons learned from reading it. What I will attempt to do is just extend my heartfelt appreciation for being able to be part of your story's center, its heart. I felt it, thank you. What I wish, after reading it, is that we should all be fortune enough to have our own "Dr. Cullen" Yeah, we really should. Who among us isn't worthy of such a miracle? Someone to love us with such other worldly essence, life, God, should give us those looks, kisses, respect, honor... Your various themes and messages have not gone unnoticed. Each of them spoke to my heart and were nicely received. I've been grieving for losses, some of which will never be made right, your story was a sad reminder of that fact. It reminds me of who I am, and that I will have to make it ok... I won't go on, I feel a bit foolish, thinking you won't even read this, but in the event you should...please receive the only thing I can give you, my humble words, small as they are, are meant to shower you with a million points of love, I give you a standing ovation even though you will never be able to see it. You are talented beyond what my words can convey. Sending you all my best thoughts and prayers, wishes for what ever success you choose to strive for, more than success I wish for you peace and good health. Respectfully, Fran belladuluk@gmail.com
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Post by Sarah on Feb 7, 2011 1:32:19 GMT -5
Awesome story. Very well written. I love the character development and although there were times I wanted to give Bella a smack, I thought it was good how you made them struggle a bit and everything wasn't just sunshine and rainbows all the time. Really in depth look. Great!
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Post by Gracie on Feb 27, 2011 19:18:54 GMT -5
This is the first time I've ever reviewed a fanfiction story. Normally I just lurk around and read without bothering to give my thumbs up (or down) However, I couldn't resist not expressing my opinion on this one. I've only started reading this and have been captivated from Chapter 1. Never have I been so drawn into a story this deep! I'm still half way through and am already feeling withdrawals since I don't want this to end. Thanks for such an amazing story. You are definitely very talented. I also saw the teaser/trailer you did. It's awesome! Really good job!
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Post by Iamhappyhere on Mar 4, 2011 8:22:58 GMT -5
Dear writer... It took me so long to write you a review for this story. I'm not one of the readers that review every chapter, even if this story deserves it, but in all honesty, I just couldn't stop reading chapter after chapter to review each of them. So now when I come to an end, I am at a loss. This story was the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I can't express how much it changed and motivated me. Your characterization, the voices you gave those characters, the differences between them, and than the love, that changes everything if given the chance...as a reader, you evoke all the emotions from me through this story. It is story that makes you second guess some of things you think you understand in life, like prejudice and easiness to be a good person. I have learn so much from your words, it's like I have been through someone's else life and now I carry those experiences with me like they were my own. You have a talent, and you are using it so good, and for so good purposes. Thank you for writing this and sharing with strangers. It is story I will remember and reread I hope forever. Zeljka
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Post by Jenn on Mar 13, 2011 8:31:34 GMT -5
I'd heard about your story before but I'd never got around to reading it until this weekend. I have to say that since I started reading I haven't been able to stop. It's now 12.33pm and I've stayed up just to finish the last chapters.
I love your Edward and Bella, simply perfect together. Thank you for writing this incredible story. xoxo
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Post by raehox2 on Mar 24, 2011 18:39:40 GMT -5
I hope I am doing this right. I just wanted to review your story. I am just at a loss as to how to describe the way it affected me. I was moved beyond words. It took me 3 days to read, of course, each day i did NOT want to stop reading. I loved the pov's, I loved this Edward, I loved this Bella. I laughed, and cried more times than I can count during this story. My husband definitley thought I was crazy. I forget which chapter, 55 or 56 maybe...the one where Edward leaves Bella in her new apartment to attend school. I lost it. I cried for like a half hour after reading that chapter. How you describe the needle in his throat. I know that feeling. Right after I read that chapter I went to the store. I needed to use the cash machine located outside the front of the store. It wasn't working...I started crying all over again. Not because of the machine, but just because I wasn't over all the emotions I had just read. I think you are a truly mazing writer and I hope you continue. And try to get yourself published. I would buy whatever you write. Honestly. Thanks for taking the time to read this. I look forward to more of your writing.
Raechel
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Post by roset on Mar 27, 2011 10:23:56 GMT -5
I am so unobservant sometimes! I've been wondering where in the world I can review for this story and it isn't until I'm on ch. 50 something that I see the review button! Ok, I've found it and now I want to say this is a WONDERFUL story! I love how sweet and deep it is with lots of mature topics that most people would shy away from. I love the Edward you have created in this story. He is kind, sexy, and most importantly GOOD! Of all the Edwards I have read about, this is one of the closest to what I think Rob might be like, if placed in the same situation as Edward is in this story. Did that make any sense!?! As for your Bella in this story, her life is so raw and realistic...too realistic at times. She is the woman most of us don't want to see, don't want to observe and get to know better for fear of having something in common with her and her situation. It takes a strong person to look past the surface features and get to know the real person that lies underneath all the armor. As this story winds down, I can't wait to see the finish line and know that everything will work out like I hope. Ok, reading on....
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Post by roset on Mar 28, 2011 16:44:54 GMT -5
I just finished this WONDERFUL story and am moving onto the outtakes and the mini sequel you have started. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
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Post by kristyv88 on Apr 4, 2011 4:17:01 GMT -5
Just read your entire story in 2 days. I was addicted. It has been added to one of the best fics I have ever read. I enjoyed every single chapter and every word was written beautifully. Best ending ever. Hope to hear more from you!!
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Post by Great Story on Apr 12, 2011 23:38:18 GMT -5
:)Another good stor Dani but whatever happen to bella in wonderland
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Post by divyvicki on Apr 17, 2011 7:33:34 GMT -5
This is a great story and I am so glad it was recommended to me on the Robsten Angel's E Online community forum. Can't wait to read the Mini on fanfiction.
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Post by lovemartyr09 on Apr 30, 2011 9:25:21 GMT -5
I think this is the first story I have read, and loved and haven't left reviews for every chapter. I know that is strange...and I am sorry. Its so engrossing though, that I didn't really know what to say after chapters. Its like you keep going, and you are still trying to figure it out...you don't know where it's going to take you and if you are even going to like it. But I really did. It really got to me. It was a beautiful story, and for such a heart breaking beginning...the ending was absolutely inspirational.
Thank you for writing! I hope to read more from you!
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Post by ykelly1 on May 5, 2011 15:54:10 GMT -5
Hello there! Was just recently recced to this story and have been loving it. I'm up to chapter 28 and the blog site changed to invited readers only. Is there any way, I can be added to that list so that I can continue reading this wonderful story. Pretty please. With cherries on top?
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