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Post by lovemesomeangst on Aug 8, 2010 10:24:53 GMT -5
I just read several reviews and Dani, you're really getting people talking! This story continues to suck me in. I squeal everytime I see an update...literally. Yes, I thought Edward was a bit harsh on Bella after coming back, especially since she did what he asked. But how can anyone really blame him? She's been gone for months never calling or checking in at all. My heart completely breaks for everyone, but I have hope that things are coming together. I'm so proud of Bella getting therapy and really doing what she can for herself. I was completely surprised with Angela. It looks like Bella wasn't just jealous of her, her bad feelings really meant something. And it's time for Alice to chill out. I understand her anger and protectiveness for Edward and Grace, but it's Edward's life, not hers. Ok, if I haven't told you enough times, I love every word you write! Thank you and I am counting down the minutes till the next update.
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Post by indiamom on Aug 8, 2010 10:41:12 GMT -5
I have read and re-read this chapter. You are just an amazing writer.
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Post by coltgal on Aug 8, 2010 10:58:17 GMT -5
I realize everyone (including myself) holds Edward up on this pedastal because he is so seemingly perfect BUT we have to keep in mind he is just as human. Bellas mistakes are obvious but Edwards aren't. He is trying to maintain control because he doesn't want to be a punching bag anymore. He especially doesn't want to throw Grace into that mix. She did as he asked and once they talk more he will understand why she didn't make contact. She was trying... she was doing as she was asked.... she was scared. He was/is hurt and angry. I think he knows how much she has changed but it is hard to accept and he is protecting himself and Grace the best way he knows how. Is he doing right by Bella? Well, he is trying but we must give him the same grace (no pun intended as we give Bella. They may have taken the harder route but she made these changes on her own. That is what is most important! She paid for it, she worked for it, she made it happen. I don't think Edward was really correct in completely leaving her but it is the path they chose and damn did she work hard to get back on track. Now Edward will have to work hard to forgive!
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Post by beeks on Aug 8, 2010 11:37:44 GMT -5
This is my first time review for such an amazing story!
Angela is a stupid bitch. Back when she started her job she was supposed to be the 'best" - yeah, my ass. Anyways, I think you wrote this beautifully. Although you didn't linger on the time Bella has spent by herself too much, you still showed how she was doing fending for herself.
Bella needed time, and in response, Edward's pissy. It's all very realistic and I admire that. In many stories I read on fanfiction (or in just other movies/books I've read in general) when there's a separation between the two fabulous main characters, there is no mourning period or anger in the mix. With 'under the apple tree', the characters deal with their faults but instead of making it all fluffy and butterflies, you really emphasis the healing process.
ANYWAYS, as I was reading the most recent chapter I was listening to "braille" by Regina Spektor and couldn't help but think that the song fit perfectly to this story. So many of the lyrics fit with 'under the apple tree.' I really hope you read this and go listen to it!
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Post by jadedworld1 on Aug 8, 2010 11:38:01 GMT -5
i am glad bella is getting better!
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Post by ukalice on Aug 8, 2010 11:54:58 GMT -5
Damn it woman I'm crying again that was beautiful!!!! That is all ... Loved it!!
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moflo
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Post by moflo on Aug 8, 2010 11:55:25 GMT -5
Just re-read the last chapter and something is bugging me. WHY aren't we ever in Bella's head when she is with Grace? I want to hear HER thoughts about how she fells about her daughter, not Edward's reaction to seeing them together. His view of her is clouded by his hurt and anger, and doesn't really show how happy Bella is to be with her baby. Hope her POV is coming soon.
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Post by lilacs46 on Aug 8, 2010 12:01:34 GMT -5
I 'concure' with all of the other reviewers. lol
I only got a notice for chapter 58, so was glad that I noticed chapter 57 was also posted, or it may not have made sense.
I still love this story. It touches my heart like no other.
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Post by lilacs46 on Aug 8, 2010 12:19:16 GMT -5
Damn, I completely forgot to mention Alice. She may be Edward's sister, but she needs to step back and let him live his own life. If she doesn't, she may end up losing her Brother. It used to piss me off when my sisters did that to me.
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moflo
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Post by moflo on Aug 8, 2010 12:25:43 GMT -5
And another thing bothering me about Edward. Why is he so oblivious to other peoples shortcomings or faults (Tanya's deceit and lack of loyalty, Angela's sticky fingers, Alice's attitude) yet is always quick to throw Bella's in her face? After everything that she has been through in her life and getting her shit together, I think she deserves better of him.
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Post by moflo on Aug 8, 2010 12:28:21 GMT -5
Did ya'll know that this board had over 14, 000 views? ?? That's nuts!!! Dani, you sure have sucked a lot of people into this story!
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Post by larajean on Aug 8, 2010 12:56:33 GMT -5
Love the lightness of the latest chapter..."I concur". Great writing.
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Post by whiplashes on Aug 8, 2010 13:31:44 GMT -5
She's the only one he didn't trust and the only one who has been trustworthy about his things and her job. Other things he trusted her with have been a little more difficult for her to handle, I guess, but she is getting there it would seem.
Lovely lovely lovely, as usual.
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Post by Christy on Aug 8, 2010 13:31:52 GMT -5
Chapter 59 was amazing...I concur with all of it!
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Aug 8, 2010 13:35:18 GMT -5
ch.59 This story just get me!!! luv it, it very captivating to read. I hope they work thing out, esp for Grace. Now that Edward needs a new house keeper and nanny for Grace I wounder if he will let her move back in. They could work on rebuilding their relationship and raise Grace together. This was an amazing chapter, look forward to the next update.
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