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Post by hopestreet on Aug 8, 2010 23:33:26 GMT -5
A million thanks for this update!!! It was heart wrenching and hilarious! The emotions were all over the place but honest. I loved it!
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Post by grabadietcoke on Aug 8, 2010 23:39:28 GMT -5
There was something totally shocking about the amount of time that went by. I didn't think he had it in him to give her the hard push or that she had it in her to stand on her own feet and then to suck it up and come back. Alice's reaction was totally understandable and I like that Edward didn't make it easy.
The explanation about the implant was perfect - and her looking into it herself was very sweet.
The entire concur conversation was a great, light way to have them together at the dinner. The fact that she would go and not worry about previous clients or their reaction. Telling. =)
The line about convincing Gracie that Bella exists was the hardest to read.
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moflo
Ready for an exam by Dr. Shullen
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Post by moflo on Aug 8, 2010 23:51:24 GMT -5
I KNEW Newton was gonna make an appearance, just wasn't expecting it to be in Edwards' house! LOVE that Bella continues to see her shrink and is starting to be more open with Edward. LOVE that Edward apologized for his part in fucking everything up. They were BOTH to blame for how it all went. LOVE how Bella describes Grace has her reflection. LOVE LOVE LOVE YOU Dani, for writing such a beautiful story that keeps me coming back for more! ♥♥♥♥
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moflo
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Post by moflo on Aug 8, 2010 23:53:10 GMT -5
OOOOOH YEAAHHHHH I'm soooo ready for my exam Voctor Shullen!
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Post by kellyprovence on Aug 8, 2010 23:55:10 GMT -5
OMG! TEARS!! HAPPY FUCKING TEARS! That happy reunion was soooooo much better than I even imagined! I just couldnt imagine how you were going to do it so it was healthy and believable and real. Not that I like "real" when I am escaping to FF world, but still. It was brilliant! Just bravo! The perfect ending to my sunday night! Thanks Dani! You Rock! Is this the end? and Do you have any other fics up your sleeve? I love Workshop and UTAT...whats next? ? kellyprovence
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Post by kellyprovence on Aug 8, 2010 23:56:43 GMT -5
I just noticed the "ready for my exam by Dr. Shullen" under my name! YES I AM! Thanks for putting those cute little saying there!
......does that mean I post too much??
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Post by beacullen on Aug 9, 2010 0:01:32 GMT -5
Wow I am just amazed at how fast you update. This was such a good chapter, I love that Bella might not like what her therapist has to say, but she respects his opinion. I felt bad for Bella when Mike Newton was the contractor that Edward had hired, that had to be so uncomefortable and just horrible to have to face. I loved Edward's last line " This isthe part I was looking forward to tonight" could he be any sweeter in that moment?
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Post by cutie123r on Aug 9, 2010 0:05:59 GMT -5
I'm so glad they are finally being honest with each other
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Post by leechlover81 on Aug 9, 2010 0:14:49 GMT -5
I'm so happy that they are both being smart and actually talking. Using Grace as a distraction is really funny, I think most couples at some point use the conversation of kids to avoid other topics. Really looking like we will get a happy ending...possibly some more babies running around since Bella is turning into a great mother?
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Post by moninp on Aug 9, 2010 0:18:08 GMT -5
There are no words to describe how beautiful this chapter is ....
I felt my heart shrink when she said "SECOND-HAND AND USED?" ... AWW ... *sniff* and "..my heart, if you still want it..." ...................... no words .....................
And Bella apologizing for everything, and telling him she has ALWAYS LOVED HIM.. and saying how sorry she is, and his response ... just perfect
Wow, again I say, no words ...
Thank you Dani!
M
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Post by FriendofUST on Aug 9, 2010 0:18:44 GMT -5
PASSIVE AGGRESSIVE Thank you for making me right. So satisfying. Love where they got and how they got there. (As if there were any doubt about their inability to keep their hands off each other when she's tihnking he's sex on legs as soon as shows up for the date.) But mostly I love seeing Bella *talk*, really talk, say what she means. I wouldn't mind some EPOV on the Newton incident, of Bella's past becoming present again. I was right I was right. Oh, and this was a well-written chapter, too.
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Post by flojo03 on Aug 9, 2010 0:48:07 GMT -5
"THIS IS THE PART I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO TONIGHT" and so say I . I am enjoying that Bella is talking more and saying what she is feeling not just saying it in her head. I had a feeling things might have been headed this way when edward asked her out. I am so happy that he has acknowledged that she is doing well and that he took into consideration her fear relating to mike newton, so much again has been achieved this chapter, I reakon he was really enjoying the perv of bella having a bath with grace!
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Post by dnaughtydnice on Aug 9, 2010 0:56:26 GMT -5
Chapter 60: You complete me. You had me at the door. I love Edward so much and I'm so happy for these two. Every chapter you write I feel it in my chest a little. Seriously this made my weekend. I might check 25 times a day for updates. Thank You.
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Post by kpeery1 on Aug 9, 2010 0:57:16 GMT -5
Chapter 60... Amazing. Had tears in my eyes reading their love declarations. One of my favorite chapters.
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Post by erin98012 on Aug 9, 2010 1:01:45 GMT -5
I started reading on Friday. Had too much wine at the Natalie Merchant concert that night so stayed in bed reading on Saturday morning. Kinda overplayed the hangover so I could stay in my pj's all day and just read. My husband brought me tissues when I needed them. Often.
I've read a lot of Fanfic and this is one of my absolute favorites. When will all of you fabulous writers get published? There is so much crap out there and I just hope youwill keep writing because you are fucking awesome.
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