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Post by lilacs46 on Aug 14, 2010 14:39:53 GMT -5
Yep, you have me in tears...again. lol
There is no other story I've read where these two charaters belong together as much as your Bella and Edward do. They fit together like two puzzle pieces.
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Post by kpeery1 on Aug 14, 2010 15:04:41 GMT -5
I don't know how you do it but I can never read a chapter and not end with tears in my eyes.
One of your BEST chapters. I will be so sad when this story ends.
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Post by luvtwilight72 on Aug 14, 2010 16:25:07 GMT -5
Great chapter! The Em and Edward thing was funny as hell!! I glad she is letting him in and she is healing
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Post by jbwebb on Aug 14, 2010 16:43:48 GMT -5
Grace dancing to the beat. whoa. sooo cute!!!!!! And Esme is the best ever. More...More...Love from these two. they deserve it. You are the BEST!!!!!!!
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Post by betsmecullen on Aug 14, 2010 16:45:28 GMT -5
You included everything I needed in this chapter. Edward taking out his frustrations, Emmett being a comedian, Bella/Grace bonding time and Bella/Edward bonding time. 4 out of 5 Kleenex (see FFN profile).
Everytime I read your words, I say a prayer of thanks that you are here, sharing yourself with us. You make a difference. Thank you.
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Post by jime22 on Aug 14, 2010 16:47:10 GMT -5
And we are fully clothed. Watching…a documentary on Lyme Disease. That was so funny. Loved the chapter Danny, they have come such a long way
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Post by beacullen on Aug 14, 2010 16:55:07 GMT -5
I am so glad to see them really being happy, and her realizing it's okay to be happy. I was glad that she was upset seeing the pictures of things that she missed with Grace. I hope it makes her never want to miss anything else with her or Edward. Edward was so cute being so nervous. They really are doing so much better, I hope it only gets better for them and all their drama is behind them.
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Post by teri on Aug 14, 2010 19:18:32 GMT -5
Oh yes!!! Love it.
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Post by Robandi on Aug 14, 2010 19:39:15 GMT -5
This story owns me hard core. I LOVE the style of you writing, and I love this story so much, one of the best ive read this year. I cant wait to see where this stroy goes, love tis Edward and Bella, and I even love Grace!
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Post by bootsnsapphires on Aug 14, 2010 20:42:31 GMT -5
I love that they are making so much progress, both as individuals, and together, and they are learning to respect each other properly. Bella doesn't call Edward a "freak" like she used to.
The way that Grace has connected to Bella and vice versa is also very heartwarming. And I can't wait to see if Grace is truly deaf, and it's just the vibrations that she is enjoying (I find this an interesting concept myself, since my partner can't stand vibrating sensations in his deaf ear, or noisy environments), or if she can hear just a little bit.
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Post by lovemesomeangst on Aug 14, 2010 21:45:41 GMT -5
Everything about this story touches me. This was another beautiful chapter. I loved the conversation/punches between Edward and Emmett. Perfect! And couldn't be happier that Edward and Bella finally "watched a movie."
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Post by coloradoperson on Aug 14, 2010 22:13:42 GMT -5
so much in this chapter. Leading up to watching the 'movie' was hilarious from Bella saying she didn't come prepared to 'watch a movie' to Edward saying he was sure Bella would want 'watch a movie' with someone who is clean. I laughed my ass off. I love when I laugh out loud when I'm reading - it doesn't happen often, but when it does, you KNOW the words you are reading are a gift that you've been given as they literally bring you right into that space, into that moment, into those emotions.
The rest was all about moving forward, trust, honesty, love, need, lust...and it was beautiful.
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Post by flojo03 on Aug 14, 2010 23:54:09 GMT -5
another fantastic chapter you covered so much emmett and his sense of humour, letting edward have a free shot for the "bella is freaky"comment, to Grace,bella and esme bonding and enjoying the music, edward and bella discussing and then having sex and bella talking about not feeling safe in that position with men but through edwards actions and words she was comfortable with her and edward in that position them both declaring their love for each other at the end I am wondering what piece of music he will play for Grace on his piano and if bella will talk to him about Alice, it was lovely that esme told edward that she had always like bella
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Post by Kristi B on Aug 15, 2010 0:34:14 GMT -5
So much love! This chapter made me very happy.
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Post by teri on Aug 15, 2010 6:35:59 GMT -5
I just had to read this chapter for a second time. Your story is my absolute favorite and SO BEAUTIFUL. Love it.
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