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Post by fanficpossession on Aug 15, 2010 9:07:12 GMT -5
Sweet, tender, beautiful....Perfection!
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Post by FL95 on Aug 15, 2010 9:58:53 GMT -5
Shuba! I read this first thing this morning but didn't have time to review cause the mister came walkin' down the stairs just as I was reading the last line. SWOOOOOOOOOOON by the way! The kick boxing conversation with Emmett had me cracking up so bad, woman! LMFAO - he has no cooth cuthe...however you spell it and I love him so much b/c despite that fact, he knows his shit and like it or not, he knows Bella...and I think Shullen heard every word he was saying. AWESOME. I felt so bad for Bella when Esme was telling Edward about how she'd shown her some pictures of Grace... Nothing like missing special moments in your childs life b/c you were busy trying to figure shit out....*sigh* Sexy sexing Shullen style. YES! LOL! That was actually so sweet and the thought process he went through while it was going on was perfection. I loved how she had a moment of freaking out just a little bit when he wanted to take her from behind (*shivers*) and then she got over it because she realized, this is fucking Cullen, not some dip twit from before.... FUCKING. LOVED. IT. The way she told him sex wasn't just sex with him and then how he took her saying she loved him and accpeted it.... I am full of happy happy right now and I love you to death. LURVE. To. DEATH. You are the best of the best my friend. XOXOXOXOXO forever.
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Post by evolveintosomething on Aug 15, 2010 17:49:22 GMT -5
okay i have to say that this chapter was probably my fave. not just because of the lemon, but because they connected. it was amazing.
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Post by Inge on Aug 15, 2010 20:50:12 GMT -5
just found your story 2 days ago and have read it all in 2 days LOL and it has had me in tears more then once and made me smile more then once. i Love it!!! cant wait for a update... big thums up from me you write beautifully
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Post by grabadietcoke on Aug 16, 2010 12:00:39 GMT -5
I love all of the ways she is demonstrating her growth and how she doesn't give up. That she is researching things aobut her daughter's deafness and thinking of ways to connect to her, all on her own. If nothing else demonstrates the change - from "it" to working out music as another way of interacting, I don't know what does.
I love that they were so awkward that he put in a lyme disease doc and she watched it. That no matter how experienced she is in sex, that she truly is a virgin in love and how they worked through her fears and connection.
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Post by kellyprovence on Aug 16, 2010 13:37:38 GMT -5
ummm, did i miss Crooked Smiles' post on this chapter? I usually am here several times a day and I dont think i saw it.
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Post by irunwithvamps7 on Aug 16, 2010 22:35:51 GMT -5
As someone who is in recovery myself, people like the 'Bella' in this story and myself will never be 'fixed.' You're right. All we can do is move forward and find out who we are now and who we are going to be.
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Post by irunwithvamps7 on Aug 16, 2010 22:56:03 GMT -5
Wow. Just -- WOW.
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Post by annetteinoz on Aug 17, 2010 4:34:29 GMT -5
This is the first time I've reviewed your story. I only started reading it last week and have been completely hooked. So much so that I have been reading it on my iPhone at work, when I should have been working.
I have enjoyed every single chapter. I love that you have been able to draw so much emotion from your story without the use of overwrought language.
Thank you.
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Post by melbietoast on Aug 17, 2010 5:15:45 GMT -5
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Post by bedroomeyes on Aug 17, 2010 9:23:33 GMT -5
This is definately one of the best fanfic stories I've ever read. You really have a way of drawing the reader in and keeping us there. I read the whole in one day and just couldn't stop it was so compelling. I anxiously await your future updates.
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Post by bikechick3 on Aug 17, 2010 17:13:31 GMT -5
I owe you a crapload of reviews! This fic was recc'd by Kharizzmatik and I've been devouring it for the last week on the tiny screen of my iPhone, which is a pain in the butt for reading. If I had been on my laptop, which I am now, I would have reviewed every chapter and told you how fabulous your story is, and how much I love your writing! Thank you so much for this story, it has just owned me for the last 6 days or so and I can't wait for the next update!
Much Love
Crystal
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Post by dani on Aug 17, 2010 22:10:10 GMT -5
Crystal,
May i ask where she recc'd this?
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Post by bikechick3 on Aug 18, 2010 14:16:45 GMT -5
Hey Dani you messaged me about the rec from Khar - I'm pretty sure it was a discussion between she and her beta - I can cut and paste for you if you like, but your pm feature has been disabled - email me at bikechick3@gmail.com
thx!
Crystal
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Post by golightly on Aug 18, 2010 15:56:48 GMT -5
I'm in the same boat as many others here. I just started reading your story a few days ago, and it's had me hooked ever since. So much so that I've been reading on my phone at work. Oopsie. I had it on my ASAP To Read list for a while, and don't know why I waited. I just caught up today. I can tell you without hesitation that it is now my #1 fic...and I read a lot of good fic. :-) It made me teary a few times today. You have a way of sucking the reader in and making her emotionally attached. I love it. I can't wait for more.
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